Allright!
I'll start with the good news first:
Clearly you are a great flash animator and good director!
I love the way you used different camera-shots from below Link and upclose to people talking! Moreover I love the story (and this half episode was the only thing I've seen by now)! Clearly you love the Zelda games and observed the characters good (Mido being fiery, Link being the rather quiet one)! My points goes out to all of that! (for I hate people who act like Link is some kind of tough guy)
Bad news is: The voice acting sucks.. Link is the only person in my opinion has a good voice. Clear but peaceful.
most of the voice acting is actually unrealistic because of the bad use of the enviroment and acoustics. Mido being angry didn't actually sound really angry.. never hold yourself in when acting angry, go crazy we love it!
Usually I don't write alot about things I think could be better.. mostly because I think no-one will apply to it anyway..
But I think this could help you out because as said before visually it's great to watch! because I can see you got the talent!
grtz!