Unfinished Upload?
Ah, another stick-life flashgame. Ok you did a good job on a few things. I loved the spirit guide thing.. it was rather original.. I wouldn't left the markers there though.. make us search.. The street lines guide cars to the walls? a little wrong.. a silver tree to get money (you don;t have to trade?) but the golden get you nothing (accept the quest)?? a little wrong.
I loved the 'Fun' meter that too is rather original. playing the game will make you always lose (alot of) money.. also you can use the tab key there.. you might want to fix it..
It was cool there was a (pointless) mini-game.. but I actually avoided it because I can get the same 'fun' for less money..
There were no little cutscene's if you got a promotion or something cool.. I missed that.
There was only 1 side quest.. Why not fix the light on the school or something else? Actually trade that silver..
There where not too many job promotions, I kinda missed that too.. just very little NPC interaction.
It's a great concept but it felt like a premature-upload.. for instance where is the mute button to the music, cause it ticked me of after a while..
Dying benefits too much.. you regain your HP, Hunger, Sleep & Time and are not forwarded a day..
Just work a few (or all of these) things, I think your concepts and originality could be rewarded (greatly) on NG.